tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3997937108031302673.post8474026785168190706..comments2023-08-17T07:59:38.737-07:00Comments on West Coast Writers: DevelopmentLoreleihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07912727189990782170noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3997937108031302673.post-25571679105646905032012-06-25T18:01:40.028-07:002012-06-25T18:01:40.028-07:00Poor fella, nothing but a snack for something bigg...Poor fella, nothing but a snack for something bigger.<br /><br />http://thebradleychronicles.wordpress.com/2012/06/21/flash-fiction-friday-shearing-placid/JKBradleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05804646020886876080noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3997937108031302673.post-83427848065175282862012-06-23T13:21:07.854-07:002012-06-23T13:21:07.854-07:00I like how you tell the story through the voice of...I like how you tell the story through the voice of the damselfly.<br /><br />http://ebooksscifi.wordpress.com/2012/06/22/perspective-by-ilyan-kei-lavanway-for-madison-woods-friday-fictioneers-100-word-flash-fictionIlyan Kei Lavanwayhttp://ebooksscifi.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3997937108031302673.post-49509962242341680052012-06-23T13:18:53.147-07:002012-06-23T13:18:53.147-07:00Nice work, expressing the story from the damselfly...Nice work, expressing the story from the damselfly's voice.<br /><br />http://ebooksscifi.wordpress.com/2012/06/22/perspective-by-ilyan-kei-lavanway-for-madison-woods-friday-fictioneers-100-word-flash-fictionIlyan Kei Lavanwayhttp://ebooksscifi.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3997937108031302673.post-7796006103148246502012-06-22T13:22:38.746-07:002012-06-22T13:22:38.746-07:00That really made me laugh, loved the way you looke...That really made me laugh, loved the way you looked at it. Great sense of humour. Kudos. <br /><br />Here is mine <br />http://vsichalwe.wordpress.com/2012/06/22/friday-fictioneers-3/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3997937108031302673.post-14853600539292228902012-06-22T12:50:03.677-07:002012-06-22T12:50:03.677-07:00I think my favorite phrase was feeling the univers...I think my favorite phrase was feeling the universe pulsing. Ha. So if I'm reading this right, the poor critter barely made it out of nymph-hood before he was eaten!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3997937108031302673.post-54021520910684692732012-06-22T09:28:17.841-07:002012-06-22T09:28:17.841-07:00I love the tone of this, the voice of the damsel f...I love the tone of this, the voice of the damsel fly. Descriptions like "rotting stem...more" were also really nice. Good job!<br /><br />Mine: https://pinionpost.wordpress.com/2012/06/22/anchors-aweigh/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3997937108031302673.post-11251564359948742022012-06-22T02:18:15.027-07:002012-06-22T02:18:15.027-07:00Dear Lorelei,
I had to laugh when I read your las...Dear Lorelei,<br /><br />I had to laugh when I read your last line. (Got there by reading the rest of your fine story quite quickly:) You and I are on the same wavelength this week.<br /><br />Aloha,<br /><br />Doug<br /><br />http://ironwoodwind.wordpress.com/2012/06/22/kaleidoscope/Douglas MacIlroyhttp://ironwoodwind.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3997937108031302673.post-5697151536585768612012-06-21T23:26:12.072-07:002012-06-21T23:26:12.072-07:00Oh dear, freshly minted and gone in seconds ....!
...Oh dear, freshly minted and gone in seconds ....!<br /><br />Here's mine: http://womanontheedgeofreality.com/2012/06/22/friday-fictioneers-gramps-and-me/Linda PHhttp://womanontheedgeofreality.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3997937108031302673.post-77103032023122851492012-06-21T20:58:55.915-07:002012-06-21T20:58:55.915-07:00Every week people wanted to know more, so it was c...Every week people wanted to know more, so it was clear none of my stories reached closure. So this week I made sure it did! But I guess it was too much closure for some. Oh, well. Who knows what next week will bring? <br /><br />Cheers,<br />LoreleiLoreleihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07912727189990782170noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3997937108031302673.post-38351682691844730432012-06-21T18:53:22.080-07:002012-06-21T18:53:22.080-07:00gone just like that, oops.
http://writersclubkl.w...gone just like that, oops.<br /><br />http://writersclubkl.wordpress.com/2012/06/22/friday-fictioneers-dragonfly-damselfly-whatever/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3997937108031302673.post-79027563937242253412012-06-21T14:30:04.803-07:002012-06-21T14:30:04.803-07:00Hi... Awwww...having such a nice time, then Swoosh...Hi... Awwww...having such a nice time, then Swoosh...sad ending. Thanks for posting your lovely comments to mine. For others, I'm here:<br />www.triplemoonstar.blogspot.comLoranoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3997937108031302673.post-10902136254636504262012-06-21T12:02:19.107-07:002012-06-21T12:02:19.107-07:00A nice story with playful undertones. Mine is here...A nice story with playful undertones. Mine is here and linked as well.: http://readinpleasure.wordpress.com/2012/06/21/fridayfictioneers-the-omen/Reading Pleasurenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3997937108031302673.post-83919513838671785112012-06-21T11:09:23.029-07:002012-06-21T11:09:23.029-07:00From frying pan into fire.
I was happy for a momen...From frying pan into fire.<br />I was happy for a moment and then oops!<br /><br />Mine: http://logo-ligi.com/2012/06/21/a-silent-moment/Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18149363845050477601noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3997937108031302673.post-77336684825500690052012-06-21T09:46:01.068-07:002012-06-21T09:46:01.068-07:00Lol, a quick cycle of life. At least she sounds qu...Lol, a quick cycle of life. At least she sounds quite happily resigned to the end.<br /><br />I like all the sharp, short sentences. <br /><br />I'm here: http://mysocalleddutchlife.wordpress.com/2012/06/20/friday-fictioneers-22nd-june/Mikhttp://mysocalleddutchlife.wordpress.com/2012/06/20/friday-fictioneers-22nd-june/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3997937108031302673.post-34321723672547229582012-06-21T09:36:52.872-07:002012-06-21T09:36:52.872-07:00I like to imagine the minds of animals but I think...I like to imagine the minds of animals but I think it's really not easy and maybe not even possible to know what their thinking is like. But mysteries fascinate me!<br />cheers,<br />LoreleiLoreleihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07912727189990782170noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3997937108031302673.post-35648846059018152292012-06-21T08:59:53.715-07:002012-06-21T08:59:53.715-07:00Talk about moving quickly. I've decided that m...Talk about moving quickly. I've decided that most animals have the mind of a person who's having a manic episode. Poor bug sounds like he met his end too. <br /><br />My linky: http://unduecreativity.wordpress.com/2012/06/21/puddle-jump/C.C. https://www.blogger.com/profile/06070310862785263964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3997937108031302673.post-45379241641398237412012-06-21T08:48:13.962-07:002012-06-21T08:48:13.962-07:00Whoops! That didn't end well! I'm on the...Whoops! That didn't end well! I'm on the list.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3997937108031302673.post-30393272298505699872012-06-21T06:09:51.456-07:002012-06-21T06:09:51.456-07:00Ha ha!!! Very nice. Here's mine
http://boomieb...Ha ha!!! Very nice. Here's mine<br />http://boomiebol.wordpress.com/2012/06/21/damsel-fly-friday-fictioneers-622/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3997937108031302673.post-48709080997401948482012-06-21T04:40:05.545-07:002012-06-21T04:40:05.545-07:00When I first saw the prompt photo, all I could thi...When I first saw the prompt photo, all I could think of was a hungry trout! I hope he enjoyed his dinner.<br />Then came another thought: http://oldentimes.wordpress.com/2012/06/21/friday-fictioneers-metamorphosis/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com