tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3997937108031302673.post1462942881059862457..comments2023-08-17T07:59:38.737-07:00Comments on West Coast Writers: Friday Fictioneers: Above the CloudsLoreleihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07912727189990782170noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3997937108031302673.post-83532752441472242252012-06-09T13:00:16.692-07:002012-06-09T13:00:16.692-07:00Interesting take on the prompt. Thank you for the ...Interesting take on the prompt. Thank you for the comments at my place.Reading Pleasurenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3997937108031302673.post-20266871228133428682012-06-09T10:09:12.044-07:002012-06-09T10:09:12.044-07:00Hi womanontheedge and Rochelle,
I do write novel...Hi womanontheedge and Rochelle, <br />I do write novels, so what I need is to shift gears here, probably. Perhaps Friday Fictioneers will teach me to simplfy if I keep at it. Increase tension, decrease characters will be my mantra for next time.<br />cheers,<br />LauraAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3997937108031302673.post-69159959573333386922012-06-09T08:38:49.034-07:002012-06-09T08:38:49.034-07:00This sounds like the start of a much longer story ...This sounds like the start of a much longer story - perhaps even a novel :-)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3997937108031302673.post-20008110603241118872012-06-09T01:51:25.810-07:002012-06-09T01:51:25.810-07:00Wow there's a lot there. Good job. Thanks for ...Wow there's a lot there. Good job. Thanks for commenting on mine. This Friday Fictioneers thing is a addictive for sure.Rochelle Wisoff-Fieldshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00090374697915874481noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3997937108031302673.post-53957071090969062242012-06-08T18:56:40.755-07:002012-06-08T18:56:40.755-07:00Hi logo-ligi Girl,
Some of the characters tried t...Hi logo-ligi Girl,<br /><br />Some of the characters tried to sneak a list of everyone on their side in a secret war to this Brin. But the ccouries were attacked, and they had to burn the list to avoid having it get to the wrong people. So it's sort of espionage-y, yes!<br />cheers,<br />LauraAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3997937108031302673.post-55625109163525578352012-06-08T13:41:22.455-07:002012-06-08T13:41:22.455-07:00Perhaps I misread the story, but I got the impress...Perhaps I misread the story, but I got the impression it was about espionage.<br /><br />Mine's here: http://logo-ligi.com/2012/06/08/radiant-flight/Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18149363845050477601noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3997937108031302673.post-11628772825050249662012-06-08T13:36:52.035-07:002012-06-08T13:36:52.035-07:00I think this is a segment of what could be a much ...I think this is a segment of what could be a much wider and interesting story. Good launcing point. Nicely written. My story is here: http://bridgesareforburning.wordpress.com/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3997937108031302673.post-70399847640078521162012-06-08T09:35:28.692-07:002012-06-08T09:35:28.692-07:00Nice one, thanks for stopping by mine
http://boomi...Nice one, thanks for stopping by mine<br />http://boomiebol.wordpress.com/2012/06/07/friday-fictioneer-6812-via-mad/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3997937108031302673.post-79443099625102883442012-06-08T09:35:15.855-07:002012-06-08T09:35:15.855-07:00You managed to cram a lot of characters, back stor...You managed to cram a lot of characters, back story and action into 100 words here, with some great names too. I'm anxious to know what's going on here. Nice one.Sandra Crookhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00534491053812317718noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3997937108031302673.post-13125435361360363342012-06-08T08:41:26.300-07:002012-06-08T08:41:26.300-07:00Thanks, theforgottenwife, i'll go read yours n...Thanks, theforgottenwife, i'll go read yours now.<br />cheers,<br />LauraLoreleihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07912727189990782170noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3997937108031302673.post-22935244270939753082012-06-08T08:20:52.108-07:002012-06-08T08:20:52.108-07:00Wow...
I love when these leave me wanting more! ...Wow...<br /><br />I love when these leave me wanting more! Very well done!<br /><br />Here's mine: http://theforgottenwife.com/2012/06/07/friday-fictioneers-6812/theforgottenwifehttp://theforgottenwife.comnoreply@blogger.com